sapphirias's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Disaster (2011)]

Sorry man

Sounds terrible. Everything is too loud. I can barely make anything out.

Ragezero responds:

Volumewise it should be simulair to other posts, but I supose you feel like it becomes too chaotic in the end. The french horns at the end are bit too high and inconsistend in volume indeed, yet the rest is how it was suposed to be, a chaotic disaster-tune :) Thank you for replying, I will use the feeback in future tracks!

[Forest of Life]

Sick stuff

The piano was 20 times better than the 8 bit part I have to agree on that. But the trasnition was flawless and even though it may not go good with the song as well as some other combinations may, you accomplished exactly what you set out to do. Keep up the good work!

Jakesnke17 responds:

Thanks man, appreciate the kind words...gonna be releasing more like this tomorrow. Could only submit two today, when I've got like 5 more. :P

[-KA89- 180BPM WIP]

Awesome effects

You really are getting the hang of using effects I can hear that. But you really need to focus on how the notes you use sound together. Nothings worse than getting down to a beat then UGHH alluvasudden its like sour notes. Definately something here if you put more work into it.

Kyleadam89 responds:

thanks for your review, I will definitely take this into consideration upon further work of this song, like I said i'm trying something new, so I ask what part soured it, the second half? I thank you for your review, by the way, I use no effects other than what I program into sytrus, so if I need work on that let me know, everything is appreciated =) thanks for taking the time to review my work!

[Think 'Bout It]

Sweet

This is really cool to listen to its like gameboy meets real life. awesome. Also I'm as well sick of people Zero bombing them all but what can you do when anyone even w/o an account can come and vote on submissions.

Jakesnke17 responds:

yeah man, it's a tad frustrating. It just makes things a bit more difficult in promoting your stuff, but eh...what can ya do?

gameboy meets real life, awesome. Thanks man. :D

[pro trance]

Not pro, sorry bro

This is pretty plain and you mastered it very weird, if at all. Also it doesn't loop properly.

killerhoofd responds:

maby your speakers are broken

[(J-N-R) Trance Dance]

Good but...

Good song awesome mastering but its jsut a bit too repetitive. Like Killer says you can do much better.

J-N-R responds:

Yeah... But if you listen to most electro songs, they are all pretty repetitive. Just more noticeable on newgrounds because you are actually focusing on the song.

But I do agree! Thanks for the review!

[Swamp Torture - Intro]

Hmm

Is Okaaaaayyyy

durst057 responds:

yeahh... made a better one

[Shadowebs]

Nah

sorry man. Tried to make myself like it, just don't. Can't.

[The Glow]

Cool beat

It reminds me of pink floyd if they made techno. Hehe.
also you dont need to post a download link there is a button to download the song at the side right below the player.

RealPublic responds:

Techno Pink Floyd sounds cool, I like that.

I put the download link because I don't like the one here. it gives wrong description about the artist and all that. My link contains more descriptive and accurate info, which will help people recognise my work on the net, an most of all Last.fm, where the link is from.

Thanks for your review

[Chemicals Consumed]

Needs melody

The song is great but it seems lacking because there isnt any melody. As for EQ its just balancing the sounds so ones not way louder than the others, and the panning too you should mess around but definate don't keep everythign centered it makes it sound muckier when you have 10 intstruments trying to all fight for dominance on 2 headphones/speakers vs 5 per output device where the instruments can sound more clear. If i beleive right most studios produce the bass on one side the treble on the other side and the vox/drums are centered. also with paning it can be cool to use for a phasing effect between headphones it makes it feel like its going back and forth.