sapphirias's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Larcenic]

My intput

In the intro everything is too loud. It just reverberates and creates feedback against itself. Once the saw comes in then it dampens all the sounds but the main baground noise is still a bit loud even then. Then once the melody comes in the saw is too loud so it muffles the melody. Instead of just messing with the mixer try adding some volume automation clips to control when it needs to rise and needs to dip down a bit to allow for other instruments. Hope this all helps.

P.S. The song feels a bit slow maybe it would be cooler faster! :P

thatguy669606 responds:

Thanks for the ideas. I will certainly mess around with it!

[[As] Tobuscus Dubstep (RMX)]

Woah woah woah!

You my good sir, most certainly know how to do dubstep. And by do dubstep I mean have sex with your wife! and by have sex I mean you know how to do dubstep!

xAlexSx responds:

LOLOL thanks dude

[Flash Brilliance]

Angel Dust and Shrooms

What I think is this is a really amazing piece of work and extremely well put together and Mastered. 10/10 man, keep up the amazing work I wanna hear more! Favorited.

Ragestorm responds:

Thanks for the great review, that would be one hell of a trip haha. its reviews like this that encourage me to keep going and improving :)

[Crush - Dirty riff]

\m/ (>.<) \m/

F***ing Awesome! MOSH!!!

BiviZ responds:

Hey hey :)
Stay metal :3
\m/0_0

[Upgrade!]

Sick

Definately sounds amazing. Is Kong a Plugin?

5kyLight responds:

Thanks! Yeah, Kong is a plugin, but it only works with Reason 5 :P (comes with it)
I'll check out some of your stuff if you want :D

[Disaster (2011)]

Sorry man

Sounds terrible. Everything is too loud. I can barely make anything out.

Ragezero responds:

Volumewise it should be simulair to other posts, but I supose you feel like it becomes too chaotic in the end. The french horns at the end are bit too high and inconsistend in volume indeed, yet the rest is how it was suposed to be, a chaotic disaster-tune :) Thank you for replying, I will use the feeback in future tracks!

[Forest of Life]

Sick stuff

The piano was 20 times better than the 8 bit part I have to agree on that. But the trasnition was flawless and even though it may not go good with the song as well as some other combinations may, you accomplished exactly what you set out to do. Keep up the good work!

Jakesnke17 responds:

Thanks man, appreciate the kind words...gonna be releasing more like this tomorrow. Could only submit two today, when I've got like 5 more. :P

[-KA89- 180BPM WIP]

Awesome effects

You really are getting the hang of using effects I can hear that. But you really need to focus on how the notes you use sound together. Nothings worse than getting down to a beat then UGHH alluvasudden its like sour notes. Definately something here if you put more work into it.

Kyleadam89 responds:

thanks for your review, I will definitely take this into consideration upon further work of this song, like I said i'm trying something new, so I ask what part soured it, the second half? I thank you for your review, by the way, I use no effects other than what I program into sytrus, so if I need work on that let me know, everything is appreciated =) thanks for taking the time to review my work!

[Think 'Bout It]

Sweet

This is really cool to listen to its like gameboy meets real life. awesome. Also I'm as well sick of people Zero bombing them all but what can you do when anyone even w/o an account can come and vote on submissions.

Jakesnke17 responds:

yeah man, it's a tad frustrating. It just makes things a bit more difficult in promoting your stuff, but eh...what can ya do?

gameboy meets real life, awesome. Thanks man. :D

[pro trance]

Not pro, sorry bro

This is pretty plain and you mastered it very weird, if at all. Also it doesn't loop properly.

killerhoofd responds:

maby your speakers are broken